My swimming goal, Is to try and hold my breath for longer when I am doing my
swimming. Im going to do that by blowing bubbles. It was very hard for me to do
that goal because it was a new skill to learn. My favourite bit was the life jaket day
we learnt how to be safe in rivers, lakes and the ocean. At your swimming lessons
is there somthing you think is hard for you?
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Hi Amelie, I liked how you tried to put in a lot of detail and what you are going to use as your goal in
ReplyDeleteYour writing. What you should work on is that you should write a longer sentence in each row what
Was your favourite thing that you learnt?
Hi, thanks for comenting on my blog. Thanks I did put heaps of detail into it. I will try and do a longer sentence in each row. Bye
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