Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Friday, 28 August 2020

Come visit New Brighton

 WALT: To write about  new Brighton

We had to make a advertisement about getting people to visit New Brighton, So hopefully it works and if you do come down make sure to check out everything on the slide because all of  them are very fun.

DO you have any friends or family that live in New Brighton and when you visited them what did you do?




Friday, 14 August 2020

We should have longer break times

 Here at NBC we think that the playtimes are too short and we are here to tell you what we think about it…


Even the news letter from edutopia was talking about how we should have longer break times this is their newsletter. Longer breaks such as recess or playtime provide opportunities for children to learn important life skills. Research shows that when children play together, they learn how to take turns, resolve conflicts, and solve problems. They also learn how to manage their own emotions and behavior, fundamental skills for life. And if we have longer break time the teachers will have longer to talk and eat before we come in. 


We should because it could make us more healthy and more fit so that is one reason and another reason is that we actually have more fun at school cause sometimes school is very very boring. So we deserve it.

The Evidence is This 

Because I'm bored of not getting enough play time + we can get more exercise.


We want longer break time because 15 Minutes really is that all we get for morning tea we should at least have 30 minutes for starters it's more exercise and the and the recommended time is 20 and over we also need time because maybe some of us might get keeped inside for a bit and get out there when the music goes. I'm not saying that the people who have been behaving bad should get all the lunch time and not get a punishment im saying they should only miss 1 to 5 minutes and then they still get time to play 


I think the other ideas are STUPID cuz we have da best idea 


If you came to this school what would you want 15 minutes of playtime at morning tea or 30 minutes. 

Don't you wanna have time to play or talk not just come outside and walk back in again


So if those reasons did not persuade you I don't know what will. BUT you have to at least consider changing it, think about it youll have longer breaks too. That's me done talking

Goodbye

  • The kids of Room 3 NBC


I worked on this argument with Miller,Oli and Alfred make sure to check out there blog.
Would you want a shorter or longer break times?

Wednesday, 12 August 2020

Would you Rather

 WALT: to write an argument

Today we had a would yo rather and it was, Would you rather be a sports star or movie star. We had to do it in 10 mins and it was quite easy.

What would you choose to be a movie star or a sports star and whats your reasons?


Wednesday, 22 July 2020

Big Eyed Eagle VS Lazy Lion

WALT: make a argument
Today my teacher  told us to make a argument about what we would rather be a eagle or a lion i choose the eagle.My teacher made us the DLO and all we had to do was put the argument in. I wish we could make it like a really long argument and share to the class but didn't have time to share everyone's argument.
What animal would you choose and why?


Friday, 19 June 2020

Little Did He Know...

Little did he know

On the surface, everything looked ordinary.

The boy in the boat was bored. He had lived beside this boring river with his boring family for his whole boring life. Nothing unexpected ever seemed to happen to him. He often went to bed at night and wished for something exciting in his life.

Little did he know, underneath the ground he walked on and the river he rowed his boat on, a marvellous, mysterious, magical menagerie of life stirred.

His life was about to become a lot more interesting…

‘’JAMES HELP ME BRING IN THE FISH’’ shouted his father james jumped into the water and swam to his father and helped him bring in the fish when he was bring the fish in he saw some lights in the water he wanted to know what it was he didnt want to let his parents worry so he agreed to investigate at the start of night. When I was rowing round in my boat I started noticing more lights in the distance, he wanted to know what they were. Night fell and he jumped in his boat and went to investigate as he got closer more lights went out’’did they know i was coming?’’ he thought to himself. He jumped out of his boat and into the water but instead of swimming he kept on falling and then he hit the ground he was so confused. ‘’Ow my head’’ he said rubbing his head’’Where am I? Hello’’ he saw all the lights go off and he looked up at the top of the water but how did they do that? He said well keep on reading and they might tell you… A young girl about the age of 9 walked up to him very scared and said’’ Where did you come from and why are you here and are gonna hurt us?’’ James was very confused and he didn't know what to say’’ um I came from above the water and i'm not gonna hurt you I was just looking around’’a teenager came from the shadows and said’’ pfft no one comes from up there go to bed lily’’ the little girl runs off and the teenager comes closer and says’’ What do you want from us?’’ this is all just too confusing and he was very scary looking.’’Um I don't want anything from you. Like I said I was just looking around I saw lights and I wanted to know what it was’’ Ah we have a snooper’’ ‘’I am NOT a snooper’’ They argue for about 10 minutes and james finally says’’ I'm james from the land up there and your a big talky mouth’’ ‘’ wow not rude or disrespectful at all huh. My name is actually Luke, nice try though’’ he was asking all  about what was up there and I had a idea’’ Why don't you come to land with me, It would be fun” luke stood there frozen and in fear’’ b-but I don't know how to swim’’ ‘’ do you know how to hold your breathe’’yes…’’ ‘’Then you will be good to go” I held onto his arm and we jumped into the water wall and I swam and I pulled him up. I pulled him onto the grass’’ You ok?’’ no answer I snuck into my house and I pulled out two towels and snuck back he said’’ Thanks and wow there is actually people living up here huh”  I didnt know that he didnt know there wasnt anyone here’’ I guess so’’. Few years past and they become best friends and the two cities united and they celebrated with a big bomb fire. Thats the end of

Little did he know…


Friday, 12 June 2020

My pretty Paragraph

WALT: to write a paragraph and put punction in.

Today me and my friends went to the willow bank and we saw very cool animals, After we went around all the animals we got ice cream it was a very yum Ice Cream. The next day me and my family went swimming with sharks, the sharks were very friendly and no one got bit. After the swimming we got out and went to the gift shop because they had a big screen of us swimming. It was so cool we were allowed to get anything from the gift shop and I got a shark toy it was so softtttt and cuddly.

Wednesday, 29 April 2020

My little BIG friend

Being big had its advantages, whoever was annoying I could just touch them and then they would get hurt, oh yeah when I want to go somewhere I can take one step then I'm there! Oh where are my manners? My name is James and I'm not normal. I was born with a condition called growingsidus and it causes me to not stop growing. I was bullied for it when I was in school, when I was 5 I was 8 feet, crazy right! People would come up to me and say ´´ How's the weather up there´´ then they would leave laughing. Then came high school. I am now 20 feet. My parents had to put me in a very high roofed high school. It was quite annoying my mum bringing me to a different school and seeing if I could fit. Finally after 8 different schools we found the right height for me but the only thing is I have my own school then the normal school is beside it so I have all my classes in my school so I can fit. Anyway last weekend my mum thought it would be fun if we went to the water park and of course I said Yes and she let me pick someone to come with us, I picked Jeff. Jeff has been my best friend since I was born. Jeff's mum Karen was pregnant at the same time but Jeff was born early so he is 1 month older. But today I have grown another 20 feet. I´m 40 feet now, At the water park we went, I couldn't really hear anyone but it was good the deep pool was shallow and that was a bummer even the water slides look like a barbie playing water slide after my mum was getting us Ice cream I picked up the cars and I was playing with them I even put jeff in one of them and I moved it around and he had a great time. At last it was time to go and we had to say goodbye to Jeff but of course we cant do it straight away because my mum is just talking to Karen so we just played out side by we I mean him I played with his dog called peanut butter he looked like a little ant it was cute but I could hardly see the dog. FInally we managed to get home. It was 8 at night. I went straight to bed. I think being big is hard work. I think it was worse than that because when I woke up I couldn't get out of bed and we had to get 25 helicopters to get me out of bed. I have no idea how they got in the house but they did and that was really confusing. I managed to get up but I had to go to the hospital and It was bad news…..
To Be Continued...
Have you ever made your own story?


Friday, 20 September 2019

How to make a peanut butter sandwich

How to make a peanut butter sandwich
What you need: Multi Grain Bread,peanut butter, Butter Knife, plate


Step 1: Get two pieces of MultiGrain Bread pieces out of the bread bag and put them next to each other on the tray.

Step 2: Get your peanut butter and open the lid then get your butter knife and stick the pointy bit in first.


Step 3: Then scoop a bit of peanut butter from the pointy bit of the butter knife. Get the fat bit of the butter knife and pull it out of the peanut butter with the some of the  peanut butter on your knife.


Step 4: Get your knife and put the knife in your hand then rub it on the multi grain bread piece then put the knife softly on the bench then take it  out of your hands then get the bread that you didn't put peanut butter on and put it on the peanut butter face of the bread then put the two pieces of bread face the peanut butter side to the blank face of the bread.

Step 5: Take a HUGE bite and enjoy!

My teacher did this and it kind of worked but in the end it still looked like a sandwich then my teacher ate it in front of us :)

Thursday, 6 December 2018

Humble Haiku's

In room 4 we are learning about haikus, it is a type

of  Japanese poem. How you make it you use

5 syllables the 7 syllables then 5 syllables again

have you ever written a haiku before?

Thursday, 13 September 2018

Quiz like Questions

I am learning to say the name of the  insects in Māori. 

Here are some examples:

Mumutawa - lady bug

Ngata - snail

pī - bee


My favourite word was Mumutawa.


What words do you know?


Reference

He aha tēnei? By Sharon Holt 


Wednesday, 12 September 2018

Nancy Netiqutte

I am learning to be respectful online.

Wednesday, 2 May 2018

My amazing first post

I hope you enjoy larning with me 🙂

Tuesday, 17 April 2018

Welcome







Haere Mai, Talofa Lava, Mālō e Lelei , Maligayang Pagdating and welcome to my very own blog for learning. I look forward to sharing my learning with teachers, my school, my family and friends anywhere.