WALT: To write about new Brighton
We had to make a advertisement about getting people to visit New Brighton, So hopefully it works and if you do come down make sure to check out everything on the slide because all of them are very fun.
DO you have any friends or family that live in New Brighton and when you visited them what did you do?
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Hi amelie its claudia
ReplyDeleteI really like your new brighton blog post because its very interesting and nicely decorated.But maybe next time you could make it less detailed so its more easy to read.bye