Friday, 19 June 2020

Little Did He Know...

Little did he know

On the surface, everything looked ordinary.

The boy in the boat was bored. He had lived beside this boring river with his boring family for his whole boring life. Nothing unexpected ever seemed to happen to him. He often went to bed at night and wished for something exciting in his life.

Little did he know, underneath the ground he walked on and the river he rowed his boat on, a marvellous, mysterious, magical menagerie of life stirred.

His life was about to become a lot more interesting…

‘’JAMES HELP ME BRING IN THE FISH’’ shouted his father james jumped into the water and swam to his father and helped him bring in the fish when he was bring the fish in he saw some lights in the water he wanted to know what it was he didnt want to let his parents worry so he agreed to investigate at the start of night. When I was rowing round in my boat I started noticing more lights in the distance, he wanted to know what they were. Night fell and he jumped in his boat and went to investigate as he got closer more lights went out’’did they know i was coming?’’ he thought to himself. He jumped out of his boat and into the water but instead of swimming he kept on falling and then he hit the ground he was so confused. ‘’Ow my head’’ he said rubbing his head’’Where am I? Hello’’ he saw all the lights go off and he looked up at the top of the water but how did they do that? He said well keep on reading and they might tell you… A young girl about the age of 9 walked up to him very scared and said’’ Where did you come from and why are you here and are gonna hurt us?’’ James was very confused and he didn't know what to say’’ um I came from above the water and i'm not gonna hurt you I was just looking around’’a teenager came from the shadows and said’’ pfft no one comes from up there go to bed lily’’ the little girl runs off and the teenager comes closer and says’’ What do you want from us?’’ this is all just too confusing and he was very scary looking.’’Um I don't want anything from you. Like I said I was just looking around I saw lights and I wanted to know what it was’’ Ah we have a snooper’’ ‘’I am NOT a snooper’’ They argue for about 10 minutes and james finally says’’ I'm james from the land up there and your a big talky mouth’’ ‘’ wow not rude or disrespectful at all huh. My name is actually Luke, nice try though’’ he was asking all  about what was up there and I had a idea’’ Why don't you come to land with me, It would be fun” luke stood there frozen and in fear’’ b-but I don't know how to swim’’ ‘’ do you know how to hold your breathe’’yes…’’ ‘’Then you will be good to go” I held onto his arm and we jumped into the water wall and I swam and I pulled him up. I pulled him onto the grass’’ You ok?’’ no answer I snuck into my house and I pulled out two towels and snuck back he said’’ Thanks and wow there is actually people living up here huh”  I didnt know that he didnt know there wasnt anyone here’’ I guess so’’. Few years past and they become best friends and the two cities united and they celebrated with a big bomb fire. Thats the end of

Little did he know…


1 comment:

  1. Wow Amelie, what an amazing story. I loved the first line "On the surface everything looked ordinary". It really made me want to read more to find out what was going to happen. Don't forget to add a WALT to your posts and also remember to use your punctuation especially those capital letters for names. Have you written any other stories?

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