Friday, 12 June 2020

My pretty Paragraph

WALT: to write a paragraph and put punction in.

Today me and my friends went to the willow bank and we saw very cool animals, After we went around all the animals we got ice cream it was a very yum Ice Cream. The next day me and my family went swimming with sharks, the sharks were very friendly and no one got bit. After the swimming we got out and went to the gift shop because they had a big screen of us swimming. It was so cool we were allowed to get anything from the gift shop and I got a shark toy it was so softtttt and cuddly.

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